It certainly looks good but personally it looks like you're following the same sort of design as your designer who did the Year1920 template, I prefer templates which are more unique. Just like to make clear this isn't saying you shouldn't do this cause everyone gets inspiration from others work but personally I'd suggest trying to add more of your own flare or combining a mixture of design ideas together.
Other then that it is certainly nice and your design work has improved allot since I last saw some work of yours! Keep it up.