Will_b Posted September 26, 2014 Posted September 26, 2014 (edited) [ATTACH]1701[/ATTACH] (Above is updated screenshot. I have made some changes using some of you opinions!) Hello Everyone!! I have been working on a game of my own... It is very tedious work! I am finally ready to get some good testing in! I have an Application Made! https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.wChangingStock Or you can visit the website directly at http://www.ChangingStock.com Please download and give me your advice! It is finally a game that isn't a MOBSTER GAME! Thanks EVERYONE! Hope you can help me do the finishing touches it needs! Edited September 28, 2014 by Will_b Quote
Will_b Posted September 26, 2014 Author Posted September 26, 2014 Also will be looking for some good staff aswell :) Quote
G7470 Posted September 27, 2014 Posted September 27, 2014 Without going into the game, I would suggest building a more mobile-friendly design. It is extremely difficult to read the text even in the mobile app. ~G7470 Quote
Will_b Posted September 27, 2014 Author Posted September 27, 2014 Thanks for Reply! The app does have a zoom feature. It is pretty mobile friendly! Any advice is appreciated! Quote
G7470 Posted September 27, 2014 Posted September 27, 2014 My advice would be to make the text much bigger when mobile. As said before, it is extremely difficult to read any of the text on the game. It looks as if it is strictly a desktop design. It would be one thing if you only used the website, but when having a downloadable mobile app, that has to be appealing and easily readable on a mobile device; otherwise, people may quickly abandon your game. ~G7470 Quote
KyleMassacre Posted September 27, 2014 Posted September 27, 2014 In all honesty, your layout is very offensive on the eyes. You need some styled tables to help people see the content on the screen Quote
Will_b Posted September 27, 2014 Author Posted September 27, 2014 Thanks for your opinion. I will work on having a mobile area option to make the parts of the game much easier without having to zoom. That shouldn't be too difficult. It's the small things that make a game great. Quote
Will_b Posted September 27, 2014 Author Posted September 27, 2014 I actually found a way to put a short video as the background... Been trying to think of what would be an awesome moving background. These opinions will make the game greater in the end! Thanks everyone! Quote
SRB Posted September 28, 2014 Posted September 28, 2014 (edited) Wow, that mark up is bad, really bad. Absolute positioned elements within the head tags? Back to web design 101 for you, son. ----- Edit; on further examination, it seems you're declaring the html doctype twice, with head and body being called twice too. Should only be one instance of the html mark up within a page -- may want to fix that. With breaking the standards to that extent, you should expect some strange results with different browsers and whatnot. Edited September 28, 2014 by Guest Quote
Will_b Posted September 28, 2014 Author Posted September 28, 2014 Lmao...I knew it wouldn't be long until people would tell me how horrible of a coder I am... Totally self taught...actually I have been using these forums for quite awhile without making an account. This is Mccodes v1 (free rights version) I didn't quite understand what you meant by declaring header twice? Where did I go wrong? :) Thanks a lot for your input! Quote
Will_b Posted September 28, 2014 Author Posted September 28, 2014 Thank you for pointing that out to me.. Looks like I got some work to do still. I will try to fix all of those errors! Hopefully I don't run into any problems doing so. :) Quote
Will_b Posted September 29, 2014 Author Posted September 29, 2014 Alright I have reduced the errors from 30 errors, to 3 errors..and a couple warnings..any advice to get these fixed? Thanks everyone! Quote
DAMINK Posted September 29, 2014 Posted September 29, 2014 <meta charset="utf-8"> Should be inbetween not after. <head> </head> Likely more wrong but thats one. Quote
Script47 Posted September 29, 2014 Posted September 29, 2014 Use: © or © for the copyright sign, currently you have � instead of ©. Quote
Will_b Posted October 1, 2014 Author Posted October 1, 2014 Thanks everyone! It's a work in progress! Quote
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