Razor42 Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 Here is another layout I have just worked on. The main aim for this was to be simple, clean and straight to the point and in my opinion I achieved this :). Would be nice to hear some of your opinions though? [ATTACH]910[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilvaTungDevil Posted March 31, 2013 Share Posted March 31, 2013 nice and clean, I like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newttster Posted March 31, 2013 Share Posted March 31, 2013 You achieved clean and simple. Check your spacing on your first dotted line. Find a better location for the title Client Testimonial, throws off the other 2. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted March 31, 2013 Author Share Posted March 31, 2013 Thanks SilvaTungDevil and I know what you mean about the spacing of dotted line newttster, ill do some changes when I get some spare time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Djkanna Posted March 31, 2013 Share Posted March 31, 2013 Pretty nice, good job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted March 31, 2013 Author Share Posted March 31, 2013 Nice to see people appreciate my work for once :P haha thanks DJK :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Posted March 31, 2013 Share Posted March 31, 2013 Very nice and clean template! Would certainly work well for a clean and easy to view portfolio. I'd focus on your margins between text and other elements as it seems some are a bit to squished up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted March 31, 2013 Author Share Posted March 31, 2013 Thanks again Dave and will look into making some changes with peoples criticism when I get time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted April 20, 2013 Author Share Posted April 20, 2013 Been doing some more work on this design to improve it. I have taken into consideration some of the things people have said and also some of my thoughts and made some changes. [ATTACH=CONFIG]935[/ATTACH] What do you's think? Please post comments and suggestions. The design is not finished yet so expect to see more updates i'd just like to know what you all think at this stage and hope you can give me information to help make it better. Thanks :). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newttster Posted April 20, 2013 Share Posted April 20, 2013 Razor ... this one definitely looks much better. May I suggest you use spell checker though. I'm sure this is not a final product but be sure and use it. In my experience, one of the things that will turn away potential clients is misspelled words and poor grammar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnGato Posted April 20, 2013 Share Posted April 20, 2013 I like it , its a nice clean. crisp design good job Been doing some more work on this design to improve it. I have taken into consideration some of the things people have said and also some of my thoughts and made some changes. [ATTACH=CONFIG]935[/ATTACH] What do you's think? Please post comments and suggestions. The design is not finished yet so expect to see more updates i'd just like to know what you all think at this stage and hope you can give me information to help make it better. Thanks :). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted April 20, 2013 Author Share Posted April 20, 2013 @newttster - thank you very much and I know about the spelling and grammar they have all been sorted know :) @JohnGato - Thank you also they're the exact things that I wanted to achieve with the deisgn. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spudinski Posted April 21, 2013 Share Posted April 21, 2013 I fail to see the "niceness" of this design: either I'm just used to different templates, or everyone here is being extremely nice. Personally, it looks like a coloured-in wireframe mockup, and an okay'ish one at that. I'd beg you to look at some of the designs over here: http://themeforest.net/category/site-templates/technology They are sub-par, but at the price one cannot complain. Nothing beats an exclusive template from a good design firm. I'll rather be the ******* who provides constructive criticism than make somebody think they're good when they have a long way to go. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W3Theory || Peter Posted April 21, 2013 Share Posted April 21, 2013 I fail to see the "niceness" of this design: either I'm just used to different templates, or everyone here is being extremely nice. Personally, it looks like a coloured-in wireframe mockup, and an okay'ish one at that. I'd beg you to look at some of the designs over here: http://themeforest.net/category/site-templates/technology They are sub-par, but at the price one cannot complain. Nothing beats an exclusive template from a good design firm. I'll rather be the ******* who provides constructive criticism than make somebody think they're good when they have a long way to go. Completely agree. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamCoder Posted April 22, 2013 Share Posted April 22, 2013 I fail to see the "niceness" of this design: either I'm just used to different templates, or everyone here is being extremely nice. Personally, it looks like a coloured-in wireframe mockup, and an okay'ish one at that. I'd beg you to look at some of the designs over here: http://themeforest.net/category/site-templates/technology They are sub-par, but at the price one cannot complain. Nothing beats an exclusive template from a good design firm. I'll rather be the ******* who provides constructive criticism than make somebody think they're good when they have a long way to go. Totally agree. But its okay'ish keep practacing just like me and you will slowly get better :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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