Space station, inner tube

[a_bertrand]

Comments & feedback are welcome as always.

[Djkanna]

Looking great, I do have one minor thing, urm the wires, specifically the where the wire comes down then goes back up, I cannot figure out if it's attaching itself to the ceiling, or it's a weird curve.

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[Dave]

Looks great other then the wires which look really un natural to the image. Other then that great job!

[a_bertrand]

Yes would need to redo the wires... They are not really good currently.

[Dave]

I also noticed there seems to be a fair few light sources but no lights? Seems all the light is just randomly coming from no where.. Could maybe look better with a few alterations to that.

[a_bertrand]

I was wondering if I should make the light source visible or not... So I will try to add some neon light tubes or something in the next render.

[Paul Evans]

It's a space ship they are so advanced they don't need lights to create light ;) lol the wires do look odd compared to the rest of the image i have to agree.

[a_bertrand]

Yep they look odd... Trying to improve them currently ;) as well as adding some light tubes.

[a_bertrand]

New version here:

Feedback welcome ;)

[Uridium]

OLD >> http://www.fuelforhtml.com/renders/inner_station_tunel.png

NEW >> http://www.fuelforhtml.com/renders/inner_station_tunel_2.png

flicking back and forth from both images The OLD has better lighting but the wires, Pipes and Hatch Bottoms dont look right

However on the NEW image the wires look better but still the problem with hatch floor and pipes

[Coly010]

Err... In the second one is the light in the middle section more intense that the first section. And the light in the first section doesn't seem to light up the Walls surrounding it correctly.

I'm not very experienced but that's what i found.

[a_bertrand]

ok changed again the lights... and the floor... and the tubes:

[Dave]

ok changed again the lights... and the floor... and the tubes:

Definitely looks allot more professional now! Very good work :) What was the completion time on this? I swear 3D modelling takes a long time.

[Nickson]

Looking nice a_bertrand! I like how it evolved :) I'm also curious to your total worktime, must be quite a bit, no?

[a_bertrand]

If I remember right it takes about 30 min to render, and I can tell you the render tool is incredibly fast, as I tried it on a different software and it was showing like 10 hours!

For the total worktime, well that's maybe 4 hours of work.