a_bertrand Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Comments & feedback are welcome as always. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Djkanna Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Looking great, I do have one minor thing, urm the wires, specifically the where the wire comes down then goes back up, I cannot figure out if it's attaching itself to the ceiling, or it's a weird curve. [ATTACH=CONFIG]187[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Looks great other then the wires which look really un natural to the image. Other then that great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 Yes would need to redo the wires... They are not really good currently. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 I also noticed there seems to be a fair few light sources but no lights? Seems all the light is just randomly coming from no where.. Could maybe look better with a few alterations to that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 I was wondering if I should make the light source visible or not... So I will try to add some neon light tubes or something in the next render. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Evans Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 It's a space ship they are so advanced they don't need lights to create light ;) lol the wires do look odd compared to the rest of the image i have to agree. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted December 6, 2011 Author Share Posted December 6, 2011 Yep they look odd... Trying to improve them currently ;) as well as adding some light tubes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted December 6, 2011 Author Share Posted December 6, 2011 New version here: Feedback welcome ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uridium Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 OLD >> http://www.fuelforhtml.com/renders/inner_station_tunel.png NEW >> http://www.fuelforhtml.com/renders/inner_station_tunel_2.png flicking back and forth from both images The OLD has better lighting but the wires, Pipes and Hatch Bottoms dont look right However on the NEW image the wires look better but still the problem with hatch floor and pipes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coly010 Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Err... In the second one is the light in the middle section more intense that the first section. And the light in the first section doesn't seem to light up the Walls surrounding it correctly. I'm not very experienced but that's what i found. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted December 7, 2011 Author Share Posted December 7, 2011 ok changed again the lights... and the floor... and the tubes: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 ok changed again the lights... and the floor... and the tubes: Definitely looks allot more professional now! Very good work :) What was the completion time on this? I swear 3D modelling takes a long time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nickson Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Looking nice a_bertrand! I like how it evolved :) I'm also curious to your total worktime, must be quite a bit, no? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 If I remember right it takes about 30 min to render, and I can tell you the render tool is incredibly fast, as I tried it on a different software and it was showing like 10 hours! For the total worktime, well that's maybe 4 hours of work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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