Opinons on my Latest layout

[stevenrfc]

Hello,

I've been really busy due to college but I managed to get quite alot done last night(Didn't sleep xD). I've managed to come up with a whole front end layout for a project I was starting.

The whole layout took me around 9 hours on total (The mascot took me 7 lol).

Cnc is always appreciated, thank you :)

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/329/9/7/mafia_redemption_layout_by_kinetic9074-d5m3668.png

Edited November 24, 2012 by stevenrfc

[Razor42]

Looks great!

[ishmell]

Its actually not bad. Color scheme is great. The shadow on the enter text needs some tweaking. Simple, clean, crisp. And if your looking to make it even more detailed I would recommend doing something with the upper navigation like buttons for each page and maybe something special for the description part of the login. Looks good though.

[jaymo]

Loving the art style here, nice layout :)

[The Spirit]

Looking good.. well done!

[Dayo]

Looks awesome but I would probly make the register link a bit bigger

[Aventro]

Here we go.

- I believe the font size is quite small. What size is it? Try 16px. http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2011/10/07/16-pixels-body-copy-anything-less-costly-mistake/

- The content section is boring. There's nothing fancy there. And in my opinion a bit to minimalistic. How about a sidebar, some boxes etc.

- Make some sort (sub?)-navigation below the header, I would personally be annoyed If I had to move the mouse that far just to navigate throughout the game.

- Use less gradient on the input fields, and change the drop-shadow on the text "Enter", either put the opacity down or move the shadows.

- make something useful out of the footer, why else have it? Here's my reasons why: http://www.webdesignerdepot.com/2010/03/how-to-build-a-footer-that-doesn%E2%80%99t-stink/

- i agree with the registration part, make it more "visible", or attractive, make us want to push our feets together and go for that registration - make a god damn button! :D Or some cool avatar dude, telling us to get registered already!

Overall I think it's quite a decent piece of art you've done, could need some improvements (shadows etc) but that's not my area.

[stevenrfc]

Cheers everyone

Yeah i wasn't sure about the shadow on the enter text, I just couldnt seem to get it right lol.

And the register button, I nwill definitely make that a bit more noticeable

Text size is quite small, I might make that a bit bigger :S

For the inside navigation, yeah it will be below the header :)

Thank you

I will definitely mess about with it some more :)

[stevenrfc]

Cheers everyone

Yeah i wasn't sure about the shadow on the enter text, I just couldnt seem to get it right lol.

And the register button, I nwill definitely make that a bit more noticeable

Text size is quite small, I might make that a bit bigger :S

For the inside navigation, yeah it will be below the header :)

Thank you

I will definitely mess about with it some more :)