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Hiya i need some feedback to put on my website (as atm its empty and dosent look good for me :))and rather then sending out loads of emails can you please PM me some feedback of the service i have offered you or if you have used/brought one of my mods tell me how the support/product was.

Sorry if this is is in wrong place .... didnt know where to put it :P

Thanks,

Dayo

CDDesigns

ps Dont forget your name/URL

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Your spelling and grammar is horrid, and it ain't just one or two mate.

Additionally, your website is not exactly "professional" as you advertised and one can clearly see it through your marketing and "title words" usage.

A few things from just your welcome page.

* You spelled "JQuery" wrong, it's "jQuery".

* " we are specialist in web game development", should be we specialize in web game development

* "McCodes", should be "MCCodes" (ps Don't use your own "spicing" keep it professional, if you are referring to another company spell it like they do)

* "scripts that are intergrated into facebook using the FBML" - Idiocy, really.

* "Hi, we are CD-Designs, Specialists in game development. We provide best quality service for your online business." - Grammar, man.

* "weather" - spelling mistake.

* You repeat that you are "specialist" three times on your welcome page.

The other pages aren't better either.

I could go further, but I don't want to sound too harsh.

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