Serin Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 hi i was wondering if a couple people non biased can review my game, pimp-wars.net along with the review any suggestions, advice i will gladly take them on board. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 i will if you like Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sniko Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 (edited) hi i was wondering if a couple people non biased can review my game, pimp-wars.net along with the review any suggestions, advice i will gladly take them on board. Sign up process Sign up button doesn't flow with the design (http://i.imgur.com/ZnsMeSz.jpg) Perhaps some sort of auto login You're vulnerable to being botted... No sort of story... Logged in The only thing really there is "Welcome to Pimp-Wars User #586!"Perhaps address the user personally, by their characters name? Show more information, get the user engaged!Latests attacks, maybe [*]Nothing to tell what what I should do Economy Very, very highFirst crime gives me $1,000000 First set of shop items are low in cost Gym The usual statsStrength Guard Agility Labor IQ [*]Doesn't tell me what each stat is used for, how can a user train tactically? Inventory Same boring design. Only 3 slots availablePrimary weapon Secondary weapon Armor Explore / City A dump of linksNo achievement of progression if everything is available at once Crimes I never fail a crime...Even if I do, it seems there is no jail timeIf this is for a set time, inform the user [*]I get endless amount of cash [*]With doing (maybe) 5 crimes, I'm level 17 Security Easy to bot signup Easy to bot trainingWith a macro With the crystals I get from crimes I have 1k crystals, but it's still 10 to refill energy Overall What do I do in your game?There is no story Do I try and get #1 in hall of fame? Then what...? [*]The design is crude, perhaps invest in a new one (IMO) [*]Something to engage the players is needed Sorry if that sounds like I'm flaming you, I didn't intend to, just wanted to give my opinion, like asked. Edited April 15, 2013 by sniko Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serin Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 thankyou please also be brutally honest, i cant improve anything if im not aware please also note we have some developments in progress Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sniko Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 thankyou please also be brutally honest, i cant improve anything if im not aware please also note we have some developments in progress http://makewebgames.io/showthread.php/43255-looking-for-someone-to-review-my-game-please?p=289054&viewfull=1#post289054 Done. I think I've supplied enough information ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serin Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 Thankyou i can address my reasoning for some points others i will look into. there is no failure for crime yet as the game is new and i didnt want people to be put off by been stuck in jail on their first crime, this will be changed as the game is more established, the economy is fairly high due to properties being high in cost, along with the property add ons it evens itself out. the leveling is only fast at first this to encourage fast development and give users intrest instantly, leveling slows down about level 100. i have captcha codes ready to put in for sign up and gym/crimes again im waiting a while for the game to become more established before i install these the welcome page is new, we plan on adding a to do list for this to help new players understand how to get started. i will address other issues maybe we can have a rereview in a couple of weeks? thankyou for taking your time to review the game Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serin Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 I wouldn't -- it gives the first players a huge advantage if they are botting now and then you block it later so nobody else can achieve what they did sp i should put them both in immediatly? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sniko Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 sp i should put them both in immediatly? Before you opened, really. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serin Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 okay il add them in thanks for the advice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KyleMassacre Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 I wouldn't -- it gives the first players a huge advantage if they are botting now and then you block it later so nobody else can achieve what they did Im sure thats what you are worried about ;) I hate captchas as they are hindrance but it does stop "botting" maybe keep the captcha system open for registration and invest in some sort of token system and if the token fails then log them out. That way "real" players aren't festered with a captcha every 10 minutes while training or doing crimes for your hardcore players that are legit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 Get guest to review it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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