my first game layout

[DreamCoder]

http://a.imageshack.us/img833/1163/editedgamelayout.png

this is my first game layout

Please give feedback and im still gna be working on it

rate out of 10 please

New link and a gun added looking for blood drips now and then i will finalize the layout

[DreamCoder]

Pictures have been removed cause of *Copyright*

[DreamCoder]

I will be editing it soon im just downloading aload of brushes

[DreamCoder]

http://a.imageshack.us/img833/1163/editedgamelayout.png

updated! and now need to find blood drips

[a_bertrand]

Mmm what shall I say, congratulations for your first layout, however it doesn't appeal much. I don't see anything which is really catching my eyes so for me it's too empty, too simple, too much photoshop effects.

So what remains to do is: check many many many web site / templates, and try to reproduce what you find which looks good.

[Spydre452]

Its alright - not the best but pretty good for your first one ;)

Keep with it bud.

[shinobi]

that your FIRST layout out !!!!

jeeeez its cool

[Haunted Dawg]

Not very appealing at all. Disgusts the web2.0 design. You have alot to learn.

[newttster]

Although I do think the KISS method works well in most cases, this is not one of them.

I like a nice clean page that is uncluttered .. this, however, is a little to uncluttered. I think it's not bad for a first attempt though.

[Paul Evans]

I would have to say it is alot better than my first attempt lol so good job!

Although you may wanna review web templates for ideas sometimes i think professional looking games seem boring but on my game it comes off quite well with alot going on. Good luck in future.

[DreamCoder]

urm old post?? i was gonna say i didnt post this today or yesterday lol i can design better than that now :P

[Haunted Dawg]

Give us an example.

[W3Theory || Peter]

I would have to say it is alot better than my first attempt lol so good job!

Although you may wanna review web templates for ideas sometimes i think professional looking games seem boring but on my game it comes off quite well with alot going on. Good luck in future.

I would have to say the opposite, (when i talk about templates in this paragraph I don't mean mine). There are a lot of great games out there who need a professional template and to make sure everything connects, prisonstruggle, prisonblock. Two examples and two well established games. Majority of the players look for two things: One of them being a very descriptive and eye catching template and then the second is to have a way they can play the game on a phone in a easy matter. I don't want to be stepping on toes here but with you template the characters look really disproportionate in my opinion and that there is too much going on at once on the template and has way to many different styles to it.

[Haunted Dawg]

Peter, not all player's want the availability to play the game on their phone.

How ever, yes people do look for the eye catching candy and user friendly design's.

[Paul Evans]

my game load quite well on my phone and on iphones so really if they are too cheap to use a proper phone they will use a pc... personally i'd prefer pc users over phone users.

[DreamCoder]

i have no idea why this got brought back up but its really old i no longer design like that im alot better not good enough to sell but better

[Haunted Dawg]

As previously asked DreamCoder, I personally would like to see a new example please.

[Dominion]

As previously asked DreamCoder, I personally would like to see a new example please.

Why he just said he is not selling anything yet so why would you want to see an example? Well... unless you're offering help anyway.

[W3Theory || Peter]

Peter, not all player's want the availability to play the game on their phone.

How ever, yes people do look for the eye catching candy and user friendly design's.

I was more thinking of having it have two styles, so you can play on your phone and play on the pc. It's a way to reach the people who can't use the pc during work time. Just an opinion