Razor42 Posted May 15, 2013 Share Posted May 15, 2013 Hi there, I have been working on sorting myself a portfolio site for a while now, since around the beginning of last month, but after many attempts I thought I found what I wanted and coded it up but decided I actually didn’t like that design and it was back to the drawing board. I have now after doing many other designs think I may have got my favourite design but still feel it can be improved but would like some of your suggestions on how to do so. It’s only the landing page so I just want it to be simple, easy to use and understand as the other pages will have more info upon myself etc. The logo was done in Illustrator and the layout was done in Photoshop Please let me know what you think and give me ways in which to improve. Kind Regards, Razor42 RazorWebDesigns. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrAnthony Posted May 15, 2013 Share Posted May 15, 2013 I'm guessing your one person? Don't use "About us" Use "About me" it's good though i wouldn't have everything on one page either but that's just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted May 15, 2013 Author Share Posted May 15, 2013 At the moment it's just me yes, but you never know what the future may hold but I guess I should us "me" instead of "us". As for everything on one page you think I should remove some of content there ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hedge Posted May 16, 2013 Share Posted May 16, 2013 I like it. The logo seems a little off me for, just a bit to oval, doesnt quite seem right. And hard to tell without seeing it, but i'd recommend adding a bit of the red from the logo into the rest of the site. Not much, just a little here and there. Nice work mate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted May 16, 2013 Author Share Posted May 16, 2013 [ATTACH=CONFIG]954[/ATTACH] Thanks for the feedback everyone. Made a few changes to fit peoples suggestions... Look better or worse or..? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted May 24, 2013 Author Share Posted May 24, 2013 I have started coding the site here: http://razorstester.webege.com/ It's obviously not finished. Rest of pages need doing, contact form needs doing, background needs changing etc but what do you's think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W3Theory || Peter Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 Doesn't work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted May 24, 2013 Author Share Posted May 24, 2013 How doesn't it work? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W3Theory || Peter Posted May 24, 2013 Share Posted May 24, 2013 The page isn't loading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razor42 Posted May 24, 2013 Author Share Posted May 24, 2013 Ah that's strange it loads for me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hedge Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 Just had another look, everything you've done seems to be rather simple, so have you thought about coding the whole thing in css instead of using images. If your going to be changing things every time someone suggests an improvement, it would make it alot easier for you to change a couple things in a css file instead of making a new bunch of images. IMO Looking better BTW. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
URBANZ Posted May 25, 2013 Share Posted May 25, 2013 looks really bad and tbh i could have done this in 5mins and on top of that the logo looks like it has been resized totally wrong just dont look right Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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