LearningCoder Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 (edited) This is the new login page i made, also the username box and password box and login button will be moved into the middle soon underneath the banner. What do you all think? Please say what will make it better. Also i was thinking of changing the buttons so they are kinda grungy style, what do you all think? http://i42.tinypic.com/id50n6.png Edited January 28, 2012 by LearningCoder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sim Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 Bg is awwsome. Needs a screens button Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 28, 2012 Author Share Posted January 28, 2012 Yeah adding buttons soon for login :) and thanks dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamble Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 Look awesome but honestly i dont thing the buttons fit with it they kind of stick out to much Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 28, 2012 Author Share Posted January 28, 2012 Should I make the buttons into a grunge style? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamble Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 yea and maybe a little smaller Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 Yeah will do :) thanks for your input on the picture means a lot :) I will post a picture up in the morning of it after I edited it :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mystical Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 Looks good. You could make the gangster society text a tad bit lighter or put some kind of glow around it. The buttons don't fit too well. I got bored and was playing around and came up with a button that looks like this. http://i44.tinypic.com/5m9yef.png If you like the button I can make more for you. I can make you any kind of buttons you want. At the low low cost of free.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 Hey dude! An yeah well do and them buttons are nice it just looks abit blurred Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 (edited) I dont like it, Its to dark. The focus isnt in the center, its to the right. The login boxes look wrong, like they've just been put there in the last minute. The login boxes and the buttons dont seem to fit with the rest of the template. The TOS buttons' text isnt properly aligned The focus of the page, the background image has a blur effect that looks strange. Aswell as at the bottom of the image we see a straight line, looks like it isnt finished. None of the text matches, like the game name, buttons text, or the login forms text. Theres probably more, but I just had a very quick look. Edited January 29, 2012 by Danny696 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 Have you read what I put? Read it before comment 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 What do you all think? Please say what will make it better. what do you all think? So you ask me what I think 4 times (one in the title) and then expect me not to tell you what I think of it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 Yeah but you went on about the buttons and username and password box when it says about them in the description of this topic.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 Yeah but you went on about the buttons and username and password box when it says about them in the description of this topic.... Why ask people what they think of something when its not finished, why not make the changes then ask us what we think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 What? I did..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 Well, you didnt did you. You say Your going to change something, e.g THE LOGIN FORM Why not change it then ask us. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mystical Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 This is the new login page i made, also the username box and password box and login button will be moved into the middle soon underneath the banner. What do you all think? Please say what will make it better. Also i was thinking of changing the buttons so they are kinda grungy style, what do you all think? http://i42.tinypic.com/id50n6.png I got bored again...... I do that sometimes ;) http://i41.tinypic.com/199lr8.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spikereloaded Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 constructive criticism is always better than just plain criticism....try it sometime Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W3Theory || Peter Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 I will have to agree with danny here, there is not much to the login to actually grade on. The background is an overused design (Which I'll admit and have used before in the past), but nothing was really done to it and then you have a title that is very dark and hard to read when blended with the bg. You say don't comment on the buttons or input field but there is nothing much at all after that. So there is very little you can judge on. i would try to add more color to it, so it's not so gray/black schemed. Good try, but there is still a lot to do. Criticism is always good, as that is how you improve as people always criticize me all the time but it helps me out in the end and I learn where to improve. Dans' criticism was constructive as he gave detail what was wrong about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 (edited) He asked what I thought, I told him, he then has a hissy that I told him Edited January 29, 2012 by Danny696 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 Ok thanks people what should I do to make it nicer? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 Ok thanks people what should I do to make it nicer? Asif I didnt tell you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 How could i make the buttons better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W3Theory || Peter Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 How could i make the buttons better? They don't go with the actual design itself, plus look flat with no flow. Make them a little smaller or atleast some nice design to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LearningCoder Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 Ok, could you make some and I will pay you? And if I did them myself I don't know what kind of design to do on them :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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