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This is the new login page i made, also the username box and password box and login button will be moved into the middle soon underneath the banner.

What do you all think?

Please say what will make it better.

Also i was thinking of changing the buttons so they are kinda grungy style, what do you all think?

http://i42.tinypic.com/id50n6.png

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Looks good. You could make the gangster society text a tad bit lighter or put some kind of glow around it. The buttons don't fit too well. I got bored and was playing around and came up with a button that looks like this.

http://i44.tinypic.com/5m9yef.png

If you like the button I can make more for you. I can make you any kind of buttons you want. At the low low cost of free....

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I dont like it,

Its to dark.

The focus isnt in the center, its to the right.

The login boxes look wrong, like they've just been put there in the last minute.

The login boxes and the buttons dont seem to fit with the rest of the template.

The TOS buttons' text isnt properly aligned

The focus of the page, the background image has a blur effect that looks strange.

Aswell as at the bottom of the image we see a straight line, looks like it isnt finished.

None of the text matches, like the game name, buttons text, or the login forms text.

Theres probably more, but I just had a very quick look.

Edited by Danny696
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This is the new login page i made, also the username box and password box and login button will be moved into the middle soon underneath the banner.

What do you all think?

Please say what will make it better.

Also i was thinking of changing the buttons so they are kinda grungy style, what do you all think?

http://i42.tinypic.com/id50n6.png

 

I got bored again...... I do that sometimes ;)

http://i41.tinypic.com/199lr8.jpg

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I will have to agree with danny here, there is not much to the login to actually grade on. The background is an overused design (Which I'll admit and have used before in the past), but nothing was really done to it and then you have a title that is very dark and hard to read when blended with the bg. You say don't comment on the buttons or input field but there is nothing much at all after that. So there is very little you can judge on. i would try to add more color to it, so it's not so gray/black schemed. Good try, but there is still a lot to do. Criticism is always good, as that is how you improve as people always criticize me all the time but it helps me out in the end and I learn where to improve. Dans' criticism was constructive as he gave detail what was wrong about it.

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