DonCityGame Posted July 23, 2011 Posted July 23, 2011 Hi, I'm looking for some constructive criticism on a layout and logo I've had made for a project of mine - Don City. Yes, another gangster game... Layout: http://i53.tinypic.com/2upsgsj.jpg Logo: http://i51.tinypic.com/2r7at88.png Thanks :-) Quote
W3Theory || Peter Posted July 23, 2011 Posted July 23, 2011 Yeah I have to agree man, that is brilliant how you did the logo, love it! Quote
DreamCoder Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 Thats amazing bro dam i really like it :) wish i was like you n peter :) keep up the Brill Work. Quote
Gucci Mane Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 Yeah, I agree. Pretty sweet bro! Keep it up. Quote
Dayo Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 it looks good but the inside layout looks a bit wierd Quote
Damagedcity.com Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 WTF??? The Logo IS freaking Awsome man Quote
DonCityGame Posted July 24, 2011 Author Posted July 24, 2011 it looks good but the inside layout looks a bit wierd Why do you think it looks weird? Is it because of the arrows and boxes? As soon as it's finished and the user data is in, I'll post another screenshot. :D Quote
W3Theory || Peter Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 I do agree with Dayo on the template part. I think the logo is brilliant, but the template itself I am not a huge fan of. Too much of one color and variations of the tone. I like the bottom part of it. Quote
Robert Rudolf Posted July 24, 2011 Posted July 24, 2011 (edited) it looks truly amazing but i dont like the content part has a massive black gap and that kills the layout tbh, you could try and like have the city as the background instead of black and have like chains or something connected to the header and droping the content, will give it a nice look, what i mean is like 2 chain hanging from the header of the template and then the content box like hanging from it if you know what i mean and menu is well just my opinion but overall AMAZING! and also give the content and menubox a bit more effect of like metal or wall or something, atm it just one solid colour , ask PETER his pritty good at that i've seen some of his work Edited July 24, 2011 by Robert Rudolf Quote
Diesl Posted July 25, 2011 Posted July 25, 2011 Logo is done very nicely. As another point to the template, you're not giving yourself much width to work with. Unless your target audience are tablet and mobile players, the whole content area should be expanded out to a width of (preferrably) 960px. Quote
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