MaKaVeLLi Posted November 21, 2010 Share Posted November 21, 2010 Come check out a Browser based game now in REAL TIME! Completely reformatted and redone with new attacking, crime system and much more! 2452TheGame Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Palmer Posted November 21, 2010 Share Posted November 21, 2010 Hey there, While the game has potential it's lacking on the writing.. might be a good idea to improve, I would also uncramp things, At the bottom there is far too much information.. I'm happy to help via PM if need be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaKaVeLLi Posted November 21, 2010 Author Share Posted November 21, 2010 To much writing at the bottom of what page? Also, I guess I should have wrote, I wanted a review on the gameplay. I am not concerned to much on appearance, since I am going to have a nice layout put in place. However, I have been to many games that have great layouts and graphics, which only become a blanket for the horrible basic lame game features that mirror the same features as every other game lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Palmer Posted November 22, 2010 Share Posted November 22, 2010 Ah, Well once you have the new layout put in place drop me a PM and I'll drop by again ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sniko Posted November 23, 2010 Share Posted November 23, 2010 Hmm, i registered wasn't too impressed with the layout, nor the font-family (Although there are only around 6 you can have, others depend on them being installed on your computer, but Verdana would be nice and look more professional) nonetheless you have implamented a few ideas into the game, maybe think of some really unqiue ones, unlike the Zynga or Storm8 ones, although you have implamented them well, unique ideas will attract more audience to your site. Maybe add a graphical and more in-depth login screen and registration system, with an integrated image concept layout which fits well with your genre of game and kind of spells the storyline/era out to the user. The alternative banner system kind of slowed down the performance of the gaming within the game, as i had to wait for it to load and it was kind of off putting (Although the banners are good). The 'mini-banners' used throughout the game (Corelene font) suggests it is a mafia themed game, but some of the banner suggest it is a army themed game. conclusion - Get a graphical template - Set up a story line - Add more unique features Thanks for Reading -sniko Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Palmer Posted November 23, 2010 Share Posted November 23, 2010 Great reply sniko :) Pretty much what I said with extra's :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghostriders Posted November 24, 2010 Share Posted November 24, 2010 You should seriously think about getting a new template, the whole layout Is really un appealing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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