Icon-city.net

[DevonNice]

I've been working on this game for quite awhile

would appericate it if you guys could check it out

and maybe stick around?

 

Thank you,

Devon

[Joshua]

Eh nothing horrible about it, just another typical McCodes / Torn clone :\

[ddgamedesign]

Joshua: Exactly, nothing that special or exceptional about it. Template is very grey, no graphics, limited crimes/features and the writing is sparse and lacking flavor (and grammar mistakes too). A 30 minute Jail sentence exactly 1 minute into playing it lost my interest completely pretty much.

[Spudinski]

Give the guy a break man.

It's looks very good DevonNice, looks like your put allot of effort into it.

I have signed up.

[ddgamedesign]

I should say my comments were meant to be constructive, not mean or nasty in any way.

[Joshua]

Ditto, Without constructive criticism where would we be ;)

[Zero-Affect]

Eh nothing horrible about it, just another typical McCodes / Torn clone :\

Seems more like flaming than constructive criticism IMO.

DevonNice i signed up with Username: demo Password: demo so people can take a quick look but it does remind me of Torn City.

Also if you want security give me a shout[mp]118[/mp]

[Jordan Palmer]

Hi Devon,

 

Here's my overview off you're site man :)

 

[align=center]Good points

• Clean and simple layout, Nothing too Over complicated
• Catchy Name
• Clean Register page

Things for improvements

• Remove .net from all banners, We don't need to know that crap
• Remove the marquee - I hate them - Look silly
• Change things to make the game original
• Widen up a few pages - looks squashed up
• New User list (ASAP)
• Level Upgrade sucks (Sorry but ya)
• Optimize Search (Use this
• Turn Captcha on (ASAP!!!)
• Code up a better mailbox,forums Or edit ones (With click able Similes,ect)

 

[align=left]That is it for me, Take my advice or leave it, Anyway Good Job man.

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