DevonNice Posted May 19, 2010 Share Posted May 19, 2010 I've been working on this game for quite awhile would appericate it if you guys could check it out and maybe stick around? Thank you, Devon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshua Posted May 19, 2010 Share Posted May 19, 2010 Eh nothing horrible about it, just another typical McCodes / Torn clone :\ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddgamedesign Posted May 19, 2010 Share Posted May 19, 2010 Joshua: Exactly, nothing that special or exceptional about it. Template is very grey, no graphics, limited crimes/features and the writing is sparse and lacking flavor (and grammar mistakes too). A 30 minute Jail sentence exactly 1 minute into playing it lost my interest completely pretty much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spudinski Posted May 19, 2010 Share Posted May 19, 2010 Give the guy a break man. It's looks very good DevonNice, looks like your put allot of effort into it. I have signed up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ddgamedesign Posted May 19, 2010 Share Posted May 19, 2010 I should say my comments were meant to be constructive, not mean or nasty in any way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshua Posted May 19, 2010 Share Posted May 19, 2010 Ditto, Without constructive criticism where would we be ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero-Affect Posted May 20, 2010 Share Posted May 20, 2010 Eh nothing horrible about it, just another typical McCodes / Torn clone :\ Seems more like flaming than constructive criticism IMO. DevonNice i signed up with Username: demo Password: demo so people can take a quick look but it does remind me of Torn City. Also if you want security give me a shout[mp]118[/mp] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Palmer Posted May 20, 2010 Share Posted May 20, 2010 Hi Devon, Here's my overview off you're site man :) [align=center]Good points Clean and simple layout, Nothing too Over complicated Catchy Name Clean Register page Things for improvements Remove .net from all banners, We don't need to know that crap Remove the marquee - I hate them - Look silly Change things to make the game original Widen up a few pages - looks squashed up New User list (ASAP) Level Upgrade sucks (Sorry but ya) Optimize Search (Use this Turn Captcha on (ASAP!!!) Code up a better mailbox,forums Or edit ones (With click able Similes,ect) [align=left]That is it for me, Take my advice or leave it, Anyway Good Job man. [/align][/align] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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