endo Posted March 8, 2010 Share Posted March 8, 2010 Hello, you may have come accross my name in these forums does not matter if you have or have not. Anyway im looking for some testers of a game im currently working on, also i would like a general review from you guys as to whats bad and whats good and what could just do with a bit more work on. I would like you to bear in mind the game is under construction so dont expect everything to be fully functioning. The URL is http://www.felonycity.co.uk A short and simple description of the game is that you are a run of the mill, average joe just trying to make his way out of the gutter and into a better life from working commiting crimes etc. As time progresses i plan to make each user able to choose how they want to live and work whether they commit crimes or go on the straight and narrow path. But im still on the drawing board for these ideas. Register an account its free and simple. Should any errors occur please inform me. As for current players it is minimal as i said the game is working but still under construction. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a_bertrand Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 Color scheme is... hurting my eyes. Red / white on black is not what I would choose Your home page is not inviting... Think that people will decide to play or not to play based basically on that. Entering the game is yet more odd... it change colors and jump to gray. Seems yet another McCode game. Nothing special, and the look kills it. Overall sorry, I don't like the game, it doesn't appeal me, doesn't show anything special, and... lacks completely about background story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
srachit Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 was the template made in paint??? srry m8 its horrible you might want to spend a little on a graphics designer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Palmer Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 I opened the tab, I closed the tab, Â It wasn't worth me staying around after your login Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endo Posted March 9, 2010 Author Share Posted March 9, 2010 Thanks for the replys i will now work on the login. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Djkanna Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 I agree but would of said it in nicer terms than Jordan xD Yeah work on a look and with any type of product.. 'Consistency is key'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan Palmer Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 I agree but would of said it in nicer terms than Jordan xD Yeah work on a look and with any type of product.. 'Consistency is key'. I couldn't be bothered to think off nicer words lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
srachit Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 I would also advice in getting the site secured I think it can easily be hacked Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.