Peter || MaxPixa

[align=center]I decided, while bored at night, to recreate a similar look for my game on dawn-mafia.com[/align] [align=center]Here is what i have so far...[/align] [align=center]LOGIN:[/align][align=center] [/align][align=center]INGAME:[/align][align=center] [/align][align=center] [/align][align=center]Let me know what you think, thanks[/align][align=center]Peter, MaxPixa Co.[/align]

New Layout Added : These templates will be up for sale, after i complete editing them and finish my third one which is a Military theme base. Thanks Contact me through PM to pre-order them. Peter,

[align=center]I decided to start making new layouts. I haven't decided if I will be selling this layout or just configuring it to my game and selling the old layout.. [/align][align=center](Before anyone asks, yes i won full rights on this characters as well as three other mafia theme characters)[/align] [align=center]]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll158/iMarine/NewMafiaLayout.png [/align][align=center][/align] [align=center]Gangster Layout For Sale[/align][align=center]http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll158/iMarine/NewGangsterLayout-1.png [/align][align=center] [/align][align=center]When I go over the mafia one and touch up and finish a military one, these layouts will be up for sale to anyone will to buy them[/align] [align=center]Please tell me what you think wnd what should be changed, as i know there should be many things that can be changed[/align][align=center]Thanks[/align] [align=center]Peter Leaman, ~MaxPixa Co [/align]

I had to be the bearer of bad news, however recently i just saw a template used with the same images though not in the right orders... I am trying to find it in my past history, unfortunately i do not keep them past a day. I will keep looking. You can easily tell that the design was not fully done by you as the text of the title (Not matter if you just threw it on there) is different/awkward compared to the rest of the template.

[align=center]Got a couple of beta testers already, looking for me. Will keep posting on updates of the game! [/align]

[align=center]Final Crusader http://www.finalcrusader.com Beta Testers! We are now looking for beta testers for our new game we are hoping to release very soon. What we are looking for our people who will search for any bugs or any dead links. We are looking for players who will give great insight on what should be changed or added on so we can make it a better playing field. Please contact me on msn if you would like to be a beta tester and after we have collected a good amount we will let all know to register and log in. MSN: [email protected] Peter Leaman [/align]

Announcement: "Hello everyone hope your having a nice trip and plane ride, and for the announcement.... does any one know how to fly a plane by any chance?"

To me it seems everything is just pushed together, trying to make it look as detail as possible but without having it organized. It is okay but i will not say a big change in the positive side compared to your old layout.

My advice is to use a friendly name than Bulletproof, as when i am searching for programmers I am looking for people that look like they can be trusted and always start with a name.

Just going on the page I can tell what is needed to be done, as soon as i got on the site i felt like i was attracted and that it wasn't going to be fun to play (not saying it is not it can be), i am more regarding the layout and design. Alot of black html work with littler actual design doesn't attract or keep players playing. You need to make players interested and like a design to it.

Very clean and straight to the point, nice work.. I like it!

If this is a beginners layout it is not bad, though my two cents would be: 1- You have to design a layout/template so that you can repeat the sides so that it can fit any screen. At the moment the way your template it has to many things on the side that make it impossible to repeat, making it only fit on one screen. 2- There is to much splatter around and unnecessarily grunge.. 3- You do not watch to make the front page text made from graphics, as that is how google reads the pages and ranks each one. 4-The top needs a little more extra effects to it, maybe a logo for the game. But good work if this is one of your first attempts

When you say your trying not to be rude.... by saying disgusted and puked... that is not really putting it in a polite way... I noticed this again on like three threads i saw you just bash right away nothing good. I think this guys got a great idea for a site. Yes the layout is not so great and he will have to put work on it, but your attitude throughout your so called "review" is "disgusting".

Will there be a contract made if we do this, as your starting to deal with heavy issues using and selling shirt designs with some ones design. Could get messy if not legally done right.. I will be up for it if you want to talk more about it

Okay but what do you offer to the table?

The hover images are nice i like them kind of got a nice style, however if your looking at it all together i think the old one was better.

5 of the images are brushes are though ? I have them on my photoshop as well.

I usually don't like to bash others and i know were not suppose to on here.(And don't take this like i am saying i am amazing as i am still a basic compared to what the whole web can show) But, all your works are very much i don't know the word. But you use the same color and use alot of outer glow. There is no variation between the layouts of how it connects. Like that layout should of taken you 15 minutes to do and i see you doing this over and over again on all your layouts. I don't want to be label as a push to put people down but you need to try and make the layout flow not just image here and image there than use the same color. Make it feel like a Halloween login temlate.

Okay , I am not trying to dis value your work or anything, but i don't get why create a similar mod that seems exactly like the original and try to sell it?

This sounds like the normal script that is put into mccode, where you can leave and attack,mug or hospitalize someone.. Not sure why you said from scratch and I could be wrong, but sounds really close to the original one.