Danny696 Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 Hey there, Recently Ive been re-working my site, and its now done, so go ahead, check it out, http://www.daniel-hanson.com Thoughts will be nice, as well as and spelling/grammar errors etc. Thanks Danny Hanson Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danger boy Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 Home page - "During my time developing PHP, I maked use of its built in MySQL functions," Should be "made" instead of "maked" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danger boy Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 "From them on" should be "From their on" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
US Vice Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 "From them on" should be "From their on" Actually, it would be "from thereon". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danger boy Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 Correct, Thanks US Vice for correcting me :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted September 11, 2011 Author Share Posted September 11, 2011 Should now all be fixed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnGato Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 it looks nice and clean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spudinski Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 (edited) The website is pretty good, but you could add a little more colour. You have a very nice CV layout, but the content isn't professional. HR(human resources, the people that look for workers) usually has 10-100 CV's to go through, and less is more. Don't use paragraphs, at all. It's unnecessary, and it doesn't say anything. Rather use key points to sum up what you actually did. eg. On my CV: Head Marshal - Performed maintenance on Spider, BT and Evo markers - Implemented new rules to better field safety - Trained new marshals The obvious should be ignored. Qualifications: Nobody cares what you got. They just cared that you actually passed school. Personal Qualities: Nobody cares. Skills: Bullet points. eg. - Hard working - Motivational - Team leader (important!) - Innovative Work Experience: Reverse the order. Most recent on top. Online Website Developer: Sum up what you know, show examples. References: Contact info, numbers, emails, etc. P.S. I have business studies, I know a lot about how businesses operate. Edited September 11, 2011 by Spudinski Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted September 11, 2011 Author Share Posted September 11, 2011 Thanks spud, Ill look into changing it etc. Thanks everyone else :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lithium Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 (edited) Danny, following Spud's tips, check Euro CV format, most widespread and compliant everywhere you send it! http://europass.cedefop.europa.eu/europass/home/hornav/Downloads/EuropassCV/CVTemplate.csp Check that Edited September 11, 2011 by Lithium url adding Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted September 11, 2011 Author Share Posted September 11, 2011 Ahh thanks, thats pretty much how I was told to do it in school. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lithium Posted September 11, 2011 Share Posted September 11, 2011 Ahh thanks, thats pretty much how I was told to do it in school. I wonder why! ;) hehe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damagedcity.com Posted September 12, 2011 Share Posted September 12, 2011 It looks nice and simple maye u shud i show some of your Works? :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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