Kieran-R Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 (edited) Ive recently started a technology based blog, and am looking for suggestions towards it. http://techtizmo.com Please give me suggestions on the theme, layout, content ect ect. Im taking this quite seriously as Im going to be investing quite a bit into marketing ect. So please note this isnt just a blog which will last a couple of days :) Thanks! Edited July 17, 2011 by Kieran-R Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 Techno boner are you taking the piss or something? Noones going to take it seriously, I do think you need a new name Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 15, 2011 Author Share Posted July 15, 2011 Techno boner are you taking the piss or something? Noones going to take it seriously, I do think you need a new name Lols... I was thinking the same thing at times. But Im not sure xD. Search "Techno Boner" in the urban dictionary ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 15, 2011 Author Share Posted July 15, 2011 Im happy for name suggestions! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 15, 2011 Author Share Posted July 15, 2011 As you are not the first person who has told me that the name is rediculous, Im moving the website over to TechTizmo.com Moderator, please delete all the posts relating to teh TechnoBoner.com domain. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runthis Posted July 15, 2011 Share Posted July 15, 2011 Looks Nice, name suggestion : use the first letter of each of the words from your slogan, 'tuar' <- you can keep it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 15, 2011 Author Share Posted July 15, 2011 Looks Nice, name suggestion : use the first letter of each of the words from your slogan, 'tuar' <- you can keep it Thanks! Can I ask what you think about the name Tech Tizmo? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vonnie Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Site looks fine for me, some good stuff on there too ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominion Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 You may want to change the name in the footer. I am also a little confused to why you have a link in the menu to validate your Xhtml (it’s got a few errors btw ;) ). The fact where ads are going to be are just big red squares make the site look ugly or is it just me seeing that? I also don’t really like the colour scheme, but once again that could just be me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilvaTungDevil Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 I just browsed through your article on the HTC desire and although you have clearly giving it thought, I'm afraid your grammar leaves a lot to be desired with a whole bunch of sentences that quite simply make no sense. Here is a quick selection that I picked out without too much thought: Mobile operating system Android is sure to have captured the world market mobile phones, HTC and actively promotes it - First sentence makes little grammatical sense. This account did not pass and Desire Z, which scored the presence of QWERTY – keyboard, which by the way, are quite rare in Android – smartphones. - Your last sentence in your first paragraph. The upper part of the phone is lifted slightly and moved to the side and then again becomes a place here, developers have used an interesting mechanism, which is laid out just fine and not stuck at work - Second paragraph second sentence. There are a whole lot more of these mistakes across the whole piece. I'm not sure if English is your first language but if you are serious about your blog invest in a proof reader before pouring money into advertisers. It appears you know what you want to say but the poor grammar means your statements aren't always expressed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 17, 2011 Author Share Posted July 17, 2011 I just browsed through your article on the HTC desire and although you have clearly giving it thought, I'm afraid your grammar leaves a lot to be desired with a whole bunch of sentences that quite simply make no sense. Here is a quick selection that I picked out without too much thought: - First sentence makes little grammatical sense. - Your last sentence in your first paragraph. - Second paragraph second sentence. There are a whole lot more of these mistakes across the whole piece. I'm not sure if English is your first language but if you are serious about your blog invest in a proof reader before pouring money into advertisers. It appears you know what you want to say but the poor grammar means your statements aren't always expressed. Thanks. But FYI, I didnt actually write that article. I simple bought a content writer to write out a few simple articles to get it started. However I have writted the article about iPhone Safari Alternatives. Let me know what you think about the language, grammar of that. Thanks for your comment though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 Thanks. But FYI, I didnt actually write that article. I simple bought a content writer to write out a few simple articles to get it started. However I have writted the article about iPhone Safari Alternatives. Let me know what you think about the language, grammar of that. Thanks for your comment though! You paid someone :O Id get my money back if I was you.. Also, in that little sentence alone, you got something very wrong. Writted? WRITTED? Are you sure? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 17, 2011 Author Share Posted July 17, 2011 (edited) You paid someone :O Id get my money back if I was you.. Also, in that little sentence alone, you got something very wrong. Writted? WRITTED? Are you sure? Dont worry, I wont be buying any more articles from the guy. This is a forum Danny. "Id" should be "I'd"!!! ".." should be "...". You also forgot a full stop after your first sentence. Lols only joking... But dont give it out unless your sure your 100% sure your perfect yourself. ;) PS: New article added and created by myself HERE Edited July 17, 2011 by Kieran-R Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 Exactly this is a forum, I don't need to have perfect grammar, if it was a professional service, then I would put in the effort to make sure it was correct Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 17, 2011 Author Share Posted July 17, 2011 Exactly this is a forum, I don't need to have perfect grammar, if it was a professional service, then I would put in the effort to make sure it was correct Yep, and thats exactly what I do. Exactly, this is a forum... So what is the need to comment on the grammer of my forum posts? There is no need... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny696 Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 Theres no need to use words you made up either. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted July 17, 2011 Author Share Posted July 17, 2011 Theres no need to use words you made up either. Lmao... Why do you have to be such a troll on these forums? Moderator, please delete all these un-called for comments made by Danny and my replys. Thanks 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janiepeter Posted September 12, 2011 Share Posted September 12, 2011 nice blog and i have just visited the stuff that you have mentioned here . You have did best by make us familiar with all these things and now ahead, we will take care to avoid all these things in a way as mobile phones are an essential part of today's life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamess497 Posted September 27, 2011 Share Posted September 27, 2011 Site seems interesting and informative.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SilvaTungDevil Posted September 27, 2011 Share Posted September 27, 2011 shame he still seems to be using the below par content writer and it hasnt been updated in a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kieran-R Posted December 4, 2011 Author Share Posted December 4, 2011 TechTizmo has undergone some updates to the theme, and site structure. Please keep the reviews coming! Any suggestions, comments are greatly appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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