Hey , My first design for my portfolio

[Toasty Developers]

Hey guys , i have kept it simple and this is the first template that i have created for my portfolio . It is a template for a text based game. I probably will release the psd but it will have to come later because i did it in a rush and i need to tidy up the psd.

Anyways guys thats it then , the first design = Done!

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[srachit]

I like it, just one thing the LOGIN in the centre of the screen looks very out of place and weird, might wanna change the font colour or give it an outline that stands out like the sign up button to its right.

[Toasty Developers]

Thanks for the comment srachit , I have edited the Login title please can you tell me if this looks better?

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[Toasty Developers]

Hey guys , i have made anouther change to this template and it is also to the login font .

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[Razor42]

Good attempt but a couple of things that need improving:

-The fonts under the leader board don't look that nice and don't fit in.

-The content section is a little plain.

-Personally I think the header is horrible, the images look stupid and don't exactly represent anything to do with a mafia.

Apart from that the rest is good :)

[Toasty Developers]

Hi razor , I wanted something funky under the leaderboard that would stand out because they are the names of the users so i believe the font is perfect for the leaderboard.

I dont know what you mean by the content section ? if this is the login then what do you mean by plain ? the graphics or the content thats meant to be there.

lastly the header doesnt need to represent anything to do with a mafia game because that was just a made up name , these images would fit in with any type of game that you want .

Anyways thank you for sharing your opinion.

[srachit]

Maybe make the login font size of 3rd copy the same as 2nd one

Also make a mock up game description content holder there

I also usually like to have a login screen available on the main page and not have to press on a button to go to login page.

[Toasty Developers]

Hi , when i made the design i made it so that the login can go under the login title so there is no button involved here.

[Toasty Developers]

+ when i get time i will add a content holder for the game description on the page an i will add some text there too.

Thanks for the suggestions people , keep them coming.

[srachit]

Hi , when i made the design i made it so that the login can go under the login title so there is no button involved here.

Oh then you should make place holder login boxes as well.