Ben-Nasha Posted July 28, 2011 Share Posted July 28, 2011 It's midnight your walking home from the Black Bull Pub then suddenly a thug in a hoody attacks you, ARGHHH GET THE FUCK OFF ME! you fight back but he pulls a knife out and threatens you. "Give me all your f*cking money now or am going to stab you up bud! you hand over all your money but when he turns away you jump on his back and snap his neck, you fell scard and run off. Next morning... You walk down to the local corner shop and pick up a newspaper, "Murder in Murray street" you throw the newspaper back on the shelf and walk quickly out the shop. "Wanted Billy Deer" all over the walls of the shops, now your on the run from the law what are you going to do now? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
W3Theory || Peter Posted July 28, 2011 Share Posted July 28, 2011 Hmm, in my opinion it's still a generic kind of story line. A story plot is suppose to make you feel connected it and give you a full understanding what is going on. Plus make you feel like you are there. This is kind are in blocks and doesn't feel like would happen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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