Oh my, I have to agree with Alain...the red is far too bright. also your header section looks lopsided the rings arent the same on either side, but arent different enough to be able to say it was on purpose. The general idea is okay, but rething how you want to do it to make it appealing to users...you do want to attract people. Look at sites you like pick them apart and remake the pieces you liked into something new and unique.
Its a beginning, but not much more..but yes we all do have to start somewhere, why we ALL choose to start using bevelled text is beyond me. Yes, Im guilty but since that was about 15 years ago ...Ill pretend I didnt do it.