Re: [REVIEW]
1. Love the home-page, very pro-looking, but the name of the game should reallly be on it somewhere! Also, the imagery doesn't really go with the game name, but maybe I'll get that later!
2. The story has a spelling mistake in it, "freely" has only 1 l in it. There are some other spelling errors, for example "amount" has only one m in it. I won't bore you with the other spelling errors, but they may annoy some people, especially old buggers like me.
:-P
3. I see premium members can be Wizards, who seem to be the best race by a mile. Might lead to an unfair game for everyone else which may seriously affect your game's logevity. I'd offer it free to everyone until the game is established and then introduce a new race, which is for premium members and slightly better than the rest. You may get some people who enjoy the game upgrading then.
4. I assume this means I don't have a weapon: " Sea Man uses their . In return, you wield your . "
5. When you buy an item (weapon) it should be your default weapon assuming you had nothing before.
Overall it's very professional and slick without any major bugs that I could find. It's probably too simplistic as it stands to really be a great game that people will pay to play as premium members, but adding more missions might help solve that.
Overall, good effort!